Revising!

There are two magical words can make your work better: review and revise. Because as the first time, not everyone can do it well or good enough to stop looking at it again. So then it takes the time for revising. I believe that every single professional writer revise their literature production lots of times, then it becomes a classic one. So probably every time when there is an important work waiting for me to do it, I will try to revise it at least once, then I can avoid a lot of mistakes. After I know the more mistakes that I have made, the less of them I may make in the future. So it is really helpful I believe. 

The words that the teacher of writing center gave me are really helpful. First of all, without a long time of reading my essay, she just asked about a little bit details about my performance, then she pointed out one of the most important point, which is also my English teacher told me in class: Due to the major style of our play is trying to be funny, I have to describe more about how I acted, how I performed to be funny, and the details of staging about the funny part of the play. I find a feeling that the teachers who are really professional at writing may have the similar ideas of what is the soul, and what is the most important part of the play. 

Then it moves on to the grammar part. This is the worst part of my English I guess. First of all, is the tense part. Just a simple idea to follow in this essay: Make it all present tenses when I talk about the analyze part of the essay, and then use all past tense of the performance part of my work. It makes more sense and more clear of my essay when I correct these mistakes. Then one of the most serious problems comes in. I can't write my sentences in a correct way. It means when I start to write, the structure of my sentences are really complicated. She tells me a "secret", when I have to write an essay, read it out loud after I finish it. Then I may find out where and why the mistakes of my sentences. This is probably the better idea that I have ever heard of! Imaging that I can revise by myself without any others' help! It practices my spoken language I guess. I feel like now I am clear about what I have to do, and how to revise. Revising is also a serious work, and I believe after that I may get better grades that I have expected about.

The feelings of writing and literature needs more practice and more reading. All the skills take much more time than I think, but the results are excited. The writing skills may come just like the first rain of spring, someday or somehow, but never late or absent to come.